Wednesday 27 March 2013

100 word challenge by Tyne hindson


Looking at all that chocolate... The chocolate was gushing in and my mouth started to drizzle.  Out of the blue a candy eagle swooped down and hung me from its raiser sharp claws. "Help help help" I landed in a horrible place a Easter wolf they are horrible but they was one wolf what was good the princes wolf Luna and her sister star star. Star was controller of stars and Luna was controller of the moon they kook me out side and they was a hole lot of chocolate.




" lison to morrow is ester we need help to deliver the chocolate and we want to let the Bunnys to deliver it and Bunnys would be better but farther says no so get in this wolf costume please help us.

100 Word challenge. Jessica Darmody


.looking at all that chocolate made tempted to eat it! My father Ant told me if I open it I would be grounded for a month and he would probably chuck giant Easter bom of me.I thought, when I am older i want my own chocolate place. Actually I want to be the EASTER BUNNY¡ That's an eggcellent idea.His cousin dec came over to his house                
and spotted my Easter egg! I screamed so loud that ant came down and asked me what was going on . I said" nothing just... Dec is trying to get my Easter egg."

100 word challenge. By Stephen Tanaka

Lookin at that cholate made my silever. I temtend my self to tank so but then the man who was working there so.I grabend the egg and ran away.The man chest me but I was to first I triked him and I went around and I lost him I went back to the shop and called my freinds and took all of the chocolate Wern he came back he was tired he so all of the cholates were gon he was very angry and tired he was so apsent he shouted me and my freinds were a happy.

100 Word Challenge by Eugena Mwita

In a posh clean famous there was a teenage girl called Eggie. Who was dreaming of chocolate bunny, she always loved chocolate bunnys.
One evening Eggie fell asleep very heavenly, then she started to dream of a giant bunny catching after me, then she stopped suddnely and looked at a chocolate fountain and said in shock "Look at all that chocolate".
Then boom she landed somewhere where with human people with chocolate bunny heads. Eggie stopped for a moment stumbled a bit and screamed " I can never belive I could eat these people alive.
Again she flashed somewhere else and that was the last...    

100 Word Challenge By Muhammed Khan


Looking at all that chocolate... made my heart pound. But suddenly an Eagle grabbed me right on the shoulder and dropped me after a few miles ahead. I landed in slushy dark chocolate and i were greatly hungry. "Where am I".
I whispered in My head. Unexpectedly I heard a bright noise coming from behind.
" Your in Easter island".
Nobody was there except for a small chocolate bunny. The island was open and wide with plants and trees and even chocolate carrots and Acorns. The Rabbits were jumping out of the floor. But then I woke up from a dream

100 word challenge by Alexandra Giacopazzi


... Looking at all that chocolate, would make the day harder. This was the first time I did this. I had never dug in my life. Well I was young. "Where is everyone? Is there a big sale one and I was never told!"
"Who are you?"
"I... I... I... I'm the Wired-looking-thing but you can call me anything you want..." There stood in front of me was the most foxiest glitch I've ever seen. "My name is Venellope. Is it ok if I call you Wired?"
" Y... E... S..." She said she liked my cart... I love her forever...

100 word challenge by mason

    .........Looking at all that chocolate.I woke up  I was stuck in a chocolate wave help help no one came I looked down oh yes it was chocolate I saw a bunny on a speed boat so I said hey you what are you called he wasn't listening so I swam and swam till I ran out of berth he stopped I said who are you called I'm the easter bunny what are you downing out on this lake I said I will get you back to the the factory I could smell the extremely lush egg I loved it. 
      

100 word challenge Naomi Dawson


 Minney  was waking down the street and She  saw a huge chocolate river.Her  eyes nearly popped out it was amazing.
 "yes, She has deemed of this before!' Then she saw a little chocolate egg rolling down the hill in to the chocolate river.
       She turned around and saw the black hole. She screamed
It was sucking her in side she  had know where to hold onto so she screamed and she got  sucked inside.

A few minutes later she  was in a chocolate  land " Look at all that chocolate!" Minney  said amazed.
She ran and jumped into to the chocolate sea.

100 word challenge by Taylor Asiamah

Looking at all that chocolate... Made my mouth soar and then my heart jumped out of my mouth! It was simply egglicious, I was tempted to jump onto the bench and grab an egg. But then walking past the back window was a big white fluffy ball.  What is that I thought? So I opened the back door to see that an Easter bunny was wearing my pants! I could of tought this guy a lesson but he gave my a basket on milky chocolate Easter eggs! I snatched them quickly, ran up the stairs and stashed them under my bed.

100 word challenge by Lewis Farthing


I loved going through the Easter holiday and I will tell you why.Dom was in the bathroom singing "ladadie ladadoo" and all of a sudden Dom fell through a time portal and then alls he saw was chocolate and he was eggsmacked and when he realised he was at chocolate island. After I had a wounder and at the end is saw spongebob but he had an egghead and 2 seconds later spongebob said "oooooooohhhhhhhhhhhhh who lives under a pineapple under the sea spongebob squarepants" and then they found a bouncing jelly tot covered with chocolate... To be continued!

Andec chocolate factory by Lewis Bentham


...Looking at all That chocolate...
I almost fainted seeing Ant and Dec buy the biggest chocolate factory in the world. My mouth started to let saliva out, it come out like bubble gum and made a puddle of saliva (yuk). I wish I was them because it would be egglisious. Ant and Dec decided to let to lucky children win a tour around the biggest chocolate factory in the world. Me and my brother in Spain decided that we were going to try and win them tickets so we could see each over. It seemed to the right way until...

100 word challenge by Kia Surrey


Looking at all that chocolate ...

 Made venalope feel hungry, so I did't just stand there she ate some. I felt a taste that I have never tasted at the corner of her eye she saw a chocolate bunny hopping around on the patch of bubble gum she ran over. Se said "hi " the rabbit was  called Luke. It was 13 years and he said "keep away from the rabbit over there." vanalope looked confused she went over and it bit .her so she took a chunk out of it and she loved it but it was only just a dream, or was it .......?

100 word challenge by Dylan Preston

...Looking at all that chocolate my mouth was watering, I took a giant bite again and again. I bit it once more and I teleported into out of space and I saw the Milky Way and stars. but the thing is the stuff was made out of chocolate and it smelled amazing. But there was a chocolate tree and it was talking to me and it said" what are you doing out of space!" "I'm looking for a portal to go back home" I said (worriedly). I saw a monster but it was eating a chocolate bar. " What are you?"

100 word challengel by Rebecca Thompson

Looking at all that  creamy chocolate it made me hungry and a I want  to eat ! Then out of a blue a small Golding chocolate bunny .It was eggtastic it said " follow me " I Whispered what you name " she replayed ..." Eggy" I shout "my name Rebecca" I can you help us from metering I fell down a rabbit hole to....      A chocolate land I was lead to a rive of chocolate so I eat most of it and the bunny I said we could make a world of chocolate in my house and it won't melted. So we made a chocolate house and they where bunny that where chocolate in our world .

100 word challenge by Luke Anderson

Looking at all that chocolate made me drool and my saliva come out like a wave. Then out of the blue a chocolate eagle came swooping down and it took me away. I felt like I was going to die but it dropped me on a patch of bubbles from bubble gum. "Where am I?" Alex screamed but then he met Lucy, his best friend who ran away from him a long, long time ago. "What are you doing here Lucy," said Alex excitedly. Then Lucy ran over to help Alex get out of the patch of yummy bubble gum.

Tuesday 26 March 2013

Edinburgh Science Festival By Eugena Mwita



On Monday 25th March some children from Y4, Y5,Y6 went to Edinburgh, to enter a Science Festival. We did cool stuff like touching cow eyeballs and making robots to do laps in the Rampage Areana. We also dressed as doctors and mine was Dr.Genie and there was Dr. Toni short for Antonia and Dr.Ellie also Dr.Dylan we were doing surgey to a plastic man that felt like rubber he got injured by riding a bicycle doing stunts. He hurt his knee that had people stones on even his knee cap dislocated.
He also had a hole in his leg that also had pebbles. We had a T.V that a long flashing tube that you put into someone to see what the problem is.
We also went to the eyeball session but I forgot what it was called but we looked at a cow's eyeballs and started to cut the fat out of it and the lenses. We got to fell it but it was gruesome, so I sat out and watched.

Then the next thing we went to was the blood bar. At the blood bar we were looking at real blood from a horse and a heart of a sheep. So they brought dark blood from a horse. So they had these tubes and the put water in and the puted teaspoons of horse blood and that made it light, then they puted odium that takes the oxygen out of the blood, so they puted some in and it began to get darker. So then we puted this electric oxygen tube to put on our finger to see how much oxygen we had in our body some o fus had ours in the 90% location so that meant good. Then we headed to the unwrapped mummy but we couldn't we had to wait for another 1hour 30minutes to see. So we went to the bubble room that had lots of bubble but there was one lady who showing a trick so we put on these shoes protectors and stood in the middle of the bubble shower and this lady pulled the leaver and a giant bubbl was surrounding us and it popped so the said" did you have a nice shower.
I would tell you more but there's too much to tell.
By Eugena Mwita




Edinburgh Science Festival by David RIgby



On the 25th march we went to Edinburgh science festival.
At the festival we did lots of different tasks. Our first task was building our on robots for ramping chariots (we have to get the most laps with our robots). The next task was the blood bar where we went to see a real heart of a sheep. After we had saw the heart we went to the ER where we helped a doll feel better the things inside of the doll were disgusting (YUCK!!!!)  at the end of the day it was a long time to get back and it was all worth it.
                                                IT WAS THE BEST DAY EVER!!!!!!!



Tuesday 12 March 2013

100 word challange by kerry shotton

The fuzzy 3 eyed cat got electrocuted then t he orange  got separated from his cotton candy bubbly bath, because he was going around people mysteries telling scary jokes and all sorts. Every one was getting sick of that stupid old cat scary people and telling silly little jokes. Even the orange was sick of him as we'll how could anyone put up with him but he found his bath jumped in it and would never leave his poor bath. Every one was scared of his bath because it kept creeping up on people and scaring them that's why every sick of him.

100 word challenge by Lewis Bentham


In a ordinary world and a ordinary house was a talking Ginger cat that always makes other things laugh, like Bath. Bath had a mouth that was always happy but if he was miserable it would not show because his mouth could not move from happy to miserable. Ginger always said the funniest jokes but he always laughed at himself when know one was looking. After a long day of Bath laughing Ginger was feeling good, when he got to Bath he forgot his joke so he said a one he already had said. Mysteriously they changed world to space.

100 word challenge by Lewis Farthing

I am bored sitting out here isn't it yes it is quite boring (BORING!). "Wow there is a teloporter and I think we should go through mysterious thing ok. So we have already landed and I am FREEZING!!!! Ok let's go and ask that man if we could go and lend his rocket and get home he said "alright" so off they went trying to get home they saw how beautiful world that we live on is amazing but it is not better than my house. We aventualy got home and it was just like I imagined.

100 word challenge by David Rigby

The orange cat was in his beautiful home when he said “I want to leave this planet and go to the moon or some place” suddenly there was a  huge bang outside so the sweet orange cat went out side to see what it was he could not sea any thing but there was a flying magic bathtub so he got in it little did he know that it was flying him to the moon when they got to the moon the cat got out but then a huge rock was dropping on them so the cat said “I want to go home" then the cat and the bath got separated .    

100 word challenge by Naomi Dawson


Timmy was  a cat that has brown fur and blue eyes, he has a friend called Rocky Rocket. Timmy went over to Rocky Rocket and said "Would you like to come on a trip with me?"  
"Yes sure." " But  were are we going? Replied Rocky
Rocket. "To space!"
Rocky and Timmy visited mars and then they saw earth.
Rocky saw the hot bubbly black bath and started flout to towards the hot bubbly black bath.
Timmy started to flout faster and and then he pulled Rocky Rocket's arm and said do not go near it, it  is dangerous  bubbly bath...

My 100 word challenge by Luke Anderson


One day their was a little orange cat what had a friend as a mysterious floating bathtub what had eyes. It let the cat go anywhere he wants to but one day when ginger was playing with his wool ball an alien came and toke ginger in to space and left her there.
Luckily he invited his flying bath to bring him to the shop but when he went to his house HE WAS GONE "were are you Ginger?" he shouted then he went to space. He knew just were to find him. He killed the alien who toke him and brought him home.    

100 word challeng by Kia Surrey

One day in space there was a bath that was crying because her was lonely and no one liked her. So she flouted a way and didn't want to come back. Then before he left she herd a sound a person should she see? Well the thing is she didn't know if it was good or bad he came and she turned happy. The cat  fell asleep and didn't wake and the alien took them to another planet ..... The cat woke up and saw a mysteries alien he gave a yelp and a screech the alien separated the cat and the bath do they get back together or not .....?

100 word challenge by Jamie Brown part 2 called invading aliens

While the casual cat and the annoying orange were sleeping they were getting captured be savage aliens. When they woke up they found them selfs tied around massive chop sticks. They were shouting screaming for help but then an astronaut came and splayed all the aliens. " keep running, keep running," the astronaut shouted. The astronaut got them into the space mobile. When they got somewhere safe the aliens popped out of the ground   and ran after them. When the aliens got tired the casual cat and the annoying orange toke break to think about what will they do next time.  

100 word challenge by Kaci Walker


                                             100 word challenge
                             by kaci walker


The very important orange was walking around the planet when he came across a
intelligent cat that said" hi mate what you doing and the bath came across a cat and a orange.they all kept walking.But then they came to a different planet because they walked for that long so once they got like on the other planet they had a rest but then after they had a rest they kept walking and walking until they came to a different planet.But if they kept walking after they got to the other plant they would die because its very hard to stay alive in space.


100 word challenge by Alaisha Baird


A super flying cat, a talking bath and a annoying orange was far to hot in the desert so they decided to go to space.

100 Word Challenge By Eugena Mwita

On a picular day there were annoying orange an talking Jamaica tom even bubbling bananas bath. There were heading to a house until there saw, these zombies coming. On of them had a needles allover him and a lady with nettles, but mostly a zombie with knives in his hands. So when something happened annoying orange got bigger and bigger and started changing places there went to a fireplace blasters and a woods full of creatures, even these other places. They had no idea where they were going. Eventually annoying orange decided to have a bubbling bath. As they all went into the bath the appeared in a strange world.

100 word challenge by Jamie Brown called terrible teleporter

The casual cat and the annoying orange where freezing on the moon so they and the cat said this while he was freezing, " I have a mysterious teleportation bath on the over side of this planet." So they went to the over side of the planet and found the mysterious teleportation bath and went on it. They ended up in the far away galaxy. They jump back in the teleportation bath and got to place that they loved but got separated and had to run back to each other. Suddenly they got transported to mars but at the huge volcano.

100 word challenge. By Jessica Darmody


The HILARIOUS prank
All of a sudden I saw Miss Ant in the bath with her bike, which was very unusual.She started singing so I decided to play a little prank on her.I had never done this prank on any one before. I thought it would be funny.The prank was to put the hot tap on when she wasn't looking.She was screaming but I was laughing!"I will get you back for this!" She shouted at me.She thought I was actually worried but, I wasn't!

100 word challenge by Kieran cook

One unusual cat Was flying to pick the mighty Neil Armstrong when she crashed on the moon Neil seen the space ship he rushed over and seen bingo the annoying orange and the unusual cat. Armstrong said "what...why in the world did you do that that space ship has vanished  Suddenly a male alien sucked me up in enchanted howl with bubble gum in I ended up on planet mars the alien looked like a massive version of a shrimp  but I can tell you one fact that will never change it is ugly starved and also vicious.

100 word challenge by Alexandra Giacopazzi

Many problems happened in outer space but the most riskiest one was the time me, Kitten and sheepish were on some sort of program for animals in space." Turkish... Sheepish look an orange bath."
" It's heading strate for us." I said in fright... Wait it wasn't heading strate for... It was heading for me! I floated up into the air and landed on the bright orange bath.
" Something was in here but it's gone."
" There's marks all over."
" What ever it was it's gone."
" Gone where..."
" Ssssssss..."
BBBOOO0OMMM!!!
" SHEEPISH COME BACK... COME... Back..." When me and Kitten woke, he disappeared...    

Friday 8 March 2013

100 word challenge by Luke Anderson extra

I walked and walked but without Tyne beside my I felt hopeless. But I knew Tyne's spirit was still with me. I walked past glistening trees and vibrant branches and lots of wonderful creatures like fish made of water and tigers looking like steel. The only thing what ruined it was that for man lurking in the woods... BOOOOM! "What was that?" I shouted. I ran over the hill and I saw Tyne, in real life. She was held captive in a cell over lava. I went to help her but it was too late. The cage fell in the lava...

100 word challenge by Luke Anderson


my friend and I walked through the forest but as we walked we saw shadows next to the trees every step of the way but when I looked behind me and their was nothing their, "strange" I said. When I looked back a man was in the shadows and Tyne was gone. "Help Luke!" Tyne screamed. I ran up the hill and all I saw... Was Tyne lying on a patch of blood. As I ran I smelt smoke and when I looked back at Tyne a man covered in flames set Tyne body to aflame. The fire was dancing violently.


100 word challenge by David rigby


I creeped along the path suddenly in frond of my eyes where two staircases
I couldn't decide so I used a coin it landed on heads that meant left I was so scared
So I went up it at that very moment I heard Screaming so I ran to the over staircase
The glassing gold trees growed to the sky the vibrant branches followed it slowly .
The cave got closer and closer then a thing jumped out it was green with 17 arms
Is quickly ran up the left staircase I Diddent want to follow it ...

100 word challenge by Alaisha Baird

As I jogged through the forest I saw two paths one looked eerie but the other one was even worse because it looked even more crooked. So I went through the first one but I felt something grabbed my leg I was so scared and I sprinted I was to scared to stop and turn around but I did and seen a spine-chilling bloodcurdling parrot. I screamed at top of my lungs and never stopped until the parrot started screaming. I could not think so I just randomly sprinted. I ran home and my mam said what was your day like.  

100 word challenge by mason


As I wondered around in this miseries garden I heard a noise when I walked foreword it began to get louder and louder and louder. So I stepped back then I shouted to my friend Dylan who didn't get a shower every night. but when I looked back he wasn't there so I looked around the other pair of stairs and he wasn't there. I looked up and I saw him on a tree. He was stuck on a DIMOND tree with glutting stars on it.it was really dark so now should make a bed so I can sleep.
               

100 word challenge by tyne hindson


As I walked through woods with Luke and Scott we fell through a magical pothole when we woke up we where in the moste mind blowing world ever they was unicorns Luke decided to ride a uinacorn but the uinacorn did not like it so the uinacorn chucked him of... Bang he got chucked him on koncreet "awwww" Luke screamed but just then the  branches tired so sparkly the leves wher glisaning I ran but some strange reason luke teleported to me it was realy scary I crept running and Luke crept teleporting to me.

100 Word Challenge By Eugena Mwita


Frightful Ghostly Forest
At night as I walked down to the forest I had a suspicion that something or someone will happen. So as I ran down the right stairs I smelled hottness and smoke, when I turned to my left someone with a black cape, a green face like goo and eyes as red like a fire balls. Then a flash of smoke just whooshed and then she was behind me. I turned around and ran up the left stairs as the trees hovering over me as it was getting darker and darker. 

100 Word Challenge. By Jessica Darmody

As I wondered through the enchanted forest I saw two strange paths. I didn't know which path to go to so I flipped a coin. Heads was the left one, Tales was the right one. A few seconds later I caught it. It landed on...  HEADS! I was so scared so I hugged a tree with glistening branches and vibrant leaves. I had to let go of the tree other wise I wouldn't get to the top of the stairs, Instead of hugging the trees I hugged my self. I was very uncountable!So I let go.

100 word challange by kerry shotton


                     The spooky scary wet forest.

   As I walked up the stairs something squeaked guess what I stood on a rats tail. Just as I was walking up to the right side of the stairs I saw a shadow so I quickly ran to the left side.
I walked up the stairs the suddenly... I herd screaming so I stopped it went quiet it was keep going on and on so I ran up the stairs but it could be any thing like a monster or a vampire coming to get me and boil me and chop me up and then eat me.

100 word challenge Kia Surrey.

I walked through the enchanted woods and I saw a tree wave at me so the obviously  I waved back but as I walked closer and closer I herd sound it was a horrible sound.I got so closer and I saw I unicorn that popped out form no where flying above me anxiously. Then a grumpy old troll popped out and bit the unicorn leg.  I punched myself to see if I was in a dream but I wasn't then the flowers looked  at  me. The unicorn grew its leg back. It said to me " hi " I fated and didn't wake up ....  

100 word challenge by Naomi Dawson


I was playing in the forest with my friends.
Then suddenly the ground started to  shake we tried to walk up the stairs. Then we saw a weird shadow at the top...
 We turned  around and started to run.
We tried the left stairs and we saw the shadow again so we turned around again but then we heard a scream...
We ran faster and faster we ran past the glistening river, we past the tall long tree's.
We saw lots of insects and animals. The forest was beautiful, but the strange shadow following behind me wasn't.
Maybe it was a strange person behind me.

100 world challenge


In the murky snake filed forest I walked throw the forest  about 15 minutes later was two stare cases I sat wondering for witch stare case I should walk... Then when I decided to take the left all of a sudden came a torch and a man and a woman the woman was so nice so I decided to take the right.
The girl Kia had said "what are you doing here" out here she said come in have a look at our Dino dogs they may sound evil but if it was up to me I'd say there kind of cute.

100 Word Challenge By Bryan Ward


                 The Scary Spooky Forest
When I reached to the stairs I looked both side and I decided to go to the left, and walked down stairs trees started to grab me  by the waist and swish me around. I saw a shadow at the bottom of the stairs I thought to my self what could it be, it could be any thing just like a monster or even a scary human coming to attack me very viciously and I will be shredded to pieces.

100 word challenge by Alexandra Giacopazzi

As quick as lightning, I fled... With me as a danger prone wolf dragon I'm quite a hit. Has the man chased me, the woods brightened. Then tow set of stairs led different ways. I led him into the darkest way. My claws dogged all the roots of tree so they didi't trip me over. He did the same, so I led him into vines. I was like an arrow shooting through a hole the size of a mans moth. As I got through he was stuck. The death like vines caught him. I ran down and tried to help...  

100word challenge by Jamie Brown


As I was jogging through the forest I had to take a break to think about going up the left set of stairs or going down the right set of stairs what were shaking with the trees. When I was doing my exercise I was making sure that I was going on the right track. Every time I went past a splited broken damaged tree I wondered if I was going the right way. When I got to the end of the left stairs I sat down and had a drink of water and got up and kept going till...

 

100 word challenge by Lewis Bentham


Me, my brother Harry and my cousin Liam was playing tag. As the day shorted by every second,  the forest was getting even spookier. I spotted something, it had bright red eyes and a black body, what was it? Something else was creeping toward me...
It jumped on me and I nearly wet my pants. Once it was in my hands it was only a little monkey. It was friendly so I decided to keep it. On the other hand we still had a unwanted monster on the loose. Every step that the monster took forward we took back, until...  

100 world changel by Rebecca Thompson



I walked in the enchanted frost  .The leaves where dancing as they fall and hit a green elf . So I flowed  the the elf he was saying"  I need to hurry !" He went up the left stairs there was loads of elf's siting on toad stools .  They  where  ran into a tree house I ran after them . I called  mobile Alexandra she came on her dragon . She told her evil dragon to stay the dragon eyes where red fireballs . So it told her where they where  they went over a tiny ancient old cures bridge  they went on the right side I said " Alexandra go and flowed .... "





100 Word Challenge By Muhammed Khan

Me and my friends were playing Football and Mike kicked it into the bush. Out of the blue... we saw a different place with stairs and green vibrant lush trees with different trees with glistening vibrant leaves. The Insects were really small and there were monkeys that were strange colours like blue. The ball was hanging in one small skinny Branch hanging. A Monkeys tail was wrapped around the ball. " Can we have our ball back? The strangest thing was that the Monkey replied back. We went near the Stairs because this where it could be. BOOM!... What was that?

100 word challenge by Dylan Preston


      As I wondered into the dark forest. I saw to sets of stairs. I went up the left one I heard a growl and I went up the right one but it was even worse… I ran up the right one and hid. I saw a eye what was yellow as the sun and It was a dinosaur and it was a T-REX. I saw a goblin and it smelled like my friend Mason who smelled like a daisy. He was lovely to be my friend. Then he saw me in the forest and he got eaten by a goblin.



  As I walked through the enchanted  forest....leaves were twirling from as I walked past I came to some stairs and at the top there were a castle walked to have a look and......
It was an old castle with wooden doors.I went into the castle and hired a bang a big one so I ran out of the castle and I met a girl called Jessica and screamed for some reason I think it was because I screamed.when I came out of the castle because I was so scared of the ghost but then when I came out I saw a unicorn.

100 word challenge by Taylor Asiamah

 I silently walked through  the vivid green Forrest confused of the two different paths. I couldn't  decide which one to take! Of course I was looking for an adventure so I took the right because its more tight and scary. So I confidently sprinted into the foggy mist and then came to a stop, a glimpse of two fiery red eyes caught my attention and then a shine of white razor  sharp teeth, then  it SNAPPED at me! No it can't be I thought... Then came HISS... I am absolutely sure that is a deadly man eating crocodile OH NO !

Wednesday 27 February 2013

100 word challeng by Kia Surrey

…the car stopped suddenly…

                                        It stopped fast and it hurt really bad and  was like I had broken some thing. Because there was unicorn that jumped in front of the car. There out side of the car was a unique unicorn with a gigantic horn. I struggled to get out of the car but   I managed so I opened the door and looked down and so how high I was " I ....think....I'll stay in the car" I said to everyone. The unicorn was pulling us up somehow then I had land safely and I was on a cloud how.......






In the distance I saw a one headed Beast. The unicorn shouted " RUN FOR IT" everyone ran and I saw him fall over and died. I saw the unicorn trip so I didn't want to leave without her she was spacial to me the best pet ever well kind of my pet so I went around an helped it then I saved her and she well we went home my mam and dad sadly died so she took her to a other house and I kept her as a pet and they had a happy life together and lived happily ever after.

100 Word Challenge By Muhammed Khan


...The Mercedes E-Class stopped suddenly...
After a small Turtle stopped in the middle of the Road. We couldn't stop because we
were going 40 miles per hour on a long straight road. The Cars Wheels screeched out
loud like nails on a black board. " Oh thank god hes still alive". The car stopped and the
Turtle was still there. When the car drove past the turtle Luckily We didn't kill him
because the cars chassi was quite high. We picked the Turtle up and then put him back
where he belongs. My Car was wrecked and one of my tyres were popped. "It will cost
me a fortune to buy a new set". The cars Airbags were taking over all the room in the
Car.

100 word challenge by David Rigby


...The car stopped suddenly...

“Bang!!!” We got out of the car and the driver was dead and there  there was a glow underneath...We all looked under the car in shock .The wheels were still screening like mad from the crash, suddenly something jumped out of the back of the car it was so fast non of us could see it very much Lewis said "Hey Joe what do you think it is?" ”I don't know"Kia said suddenly lots of the more little critters jumping all around the place suddenly.
A asteroid came and they followed it ."CRASH! BANG"...

 

100 word challenge by Lewis Farthing


The blue Lamborghini stopped suddenly, because a fish van stopped in the way and by mistake we ran over a cat and the tiers just automatically stopped somehow,the weels skreeched like fingers on a blackbord flipped and tried to toss them selvs out of there seats    ( aaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!!)and befor they did they found that they were flying. Whilst we were flying an earthquake struk and killed tuns of people ( building fall in and every one fell threw a hole exept me and Kia). We circled the world and we could not find any thing in the world I mean it.

100 word challenge by Bryan

The car is powerfull and it is red and it is fast and fast !!!!!!!!! And the window is black as the night sky. People could here noises coming from the graves popped up the ZOMBIES and it said brains and brains and brains !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

100 word challenge by Naomi Dawson


The car stopped with a BANG!! Because a huge allian sorcer was following behind them. The  weels were screeching as the car stoped and every stayed still.
"What was that mum?" Said the girl
"I do not know" replied mum.
They all got out of the car and saw a grate big flying sorcer.
It was a huge as an elephant.
Mum did a head count,  "Lucy, Carl, Lewis and dad few were were missing no one."
The girl looked around her "mum were are we?"
 "It lookes like were I grew up."
Then something cam out of the sorcer...

100 word challenge by mason


The time car  stopped because a big dragon jumped In front of it.When they got out in 
space.it was a the biggest dragon on the wold.the wells started the slide and squeak.
 The dragon picked up the flying time car and he he tock us to the dragon ?NO! Said bill shouting to the dragon.When they reached dry land. the dragon nicked the computer NO said bill shouting to the half beastly dragon.dad said be quit now dragon or I will kill you and eat you for my dinner and tea it will last a year.

100 word challenge by alaisha b


... The car stopped suddenly... when the wings give up and shuck as a volcano pop up. It happend in a street called rainbow street.
Weres my dragon toy I souted" I WANT MY DRAGON NOW!!!!!!!!!!

100word Challenge Extra by Jamie B

At the top of my voice I shouted, "Mum where are you?!" Mum was missing so I looked for her everywhere. Then I heard a voice in my head saying Jamie repeatedly, "Jamie, Jamie, Jamie." I ran back to the car to find Dad and tell him what happened. "Dad dad where have you gone." After I looked for I went into the car to wait for him. Then I seen a note so I went pick it up but the wind blow it. So I had to run after it. Then it said, "come down to the metro station."

100 word challenge by kaci walker


The car stopped and suddenly....
Something had jumped in front of it and the man got the fright of his life when saw it was cat a big bulging scary cat a witch's cat . Then the man got out of the car and the cat scratched the hell out of the him and his daughter saw something bouncing along the street and it was a monkey that was bouncing. Then once we all got out the monkey popped the tires and the also blew up and no one new it was going to happen and we shouted HELP!!!!!!. Then we walked the rest of the way home and had something hot to eat and something hot to drink and then something when't bang and my dad went up to see what it was and all hired him go AH HELP!!!!! So my mum went up.Then we went toddling up after her we saw my dad in the cubbared but my mum was gone and we were stuck with my dad but I don't really now that because my dad is tied up and so we untried him.  


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100 word challenge by Kerry Shotton


The car stopped suddenly : A sheep dropped from the sky right in front of my car, I thought to my self should I pull over on the grass or should I pull the brake.
Guess what I did I pulled over on to the grass because I didn't want to kill that sheep, because there life's are just like are life's. Sheep only have one life sometime but we have at least two life's. Sometime's the vets fans save the animals but as well the hospital can't saves us sometimes. After that we realised we where on a crusty road.

100 word challeng by Kia Surrey

…the car stopped suddenly…

                                        It stopped fast and it hurt really bad and  was like I had broken some thing. Because there was unicorn that jumped in front of the car. There out side of the car was a unique unicorn with a gigantic horn. I struggled to get out of the car but   I managed so I opened the door and looked down and so how high I was " I ....think....I'll stay in the car" I said to everyone. The unicorn was pulling us up somehow then I had land safely and I was on a cloud how.......

100 word challenge extra. By Jessica Darmody


About 3 minutes later cars were passing by, most of the cars just looked at him, then drove off, but there was only one car that had stopped and said to the driver" driver, driver, are you okay, hello? Hello? Hello? Can you hear me? Yoohoo? Can you hear me?" The driver suddenly opened one eye and then closed it.The person in the other car had called the ambulance and the police. 5 minutes later and the police and ambulance were there. The driver was not moving any more, he wasn't breathing." He might be dead said the ambulance man.

They had took him to the hospital to see if they could bring him back to life, but nothing was working. The person that had found him like that got question off the police and all that person said was" I was driving along to the airport to see if my friend, was there but some one else had found her and took her to their home. The drivers family was so upset they had cremated him on his funeral. They had thanked the person in the other car for finding him and calling the ambulance, and police.

100 word challange by Alisha Maguire


... The car stopped suddenly..
We were drying through the village and suddenly some thing mysterious happened. A dragon came out of know where and it picked up our car and started flying with us and dropped us and smoke every where we ended up in some town some how. We tried to get out of the car but we couldn't because the doors were locked tight and the car was starting to go on fire and flame up.
Some people in cars were diving past none of them saw us but one person did they helped us out of the car and unlocked it for us we eventually got out.

100 word challenge. By Jessica Darmody


...The car stopped suddenly...
A man was  on his way to the airport until something strange happened.The car nearly crashed because of a flying elephant that had only one eye and a brown tale.It had flew across the car because of a cruel teacher with blond and brown  hair!The car nearly crashed because of it and people could have died. The car had squeaked as the driver stamped on the brake so hard!  He must of been hurt really badly.All of a sudden the driver had a really bad heart attack but no one was to see it.

100word Challenge By Jamie B


Me and my friend were at football till it finished so we went in our Mum and Dads car. Then when we were at Howdon where everybody plays. The car stopped suddenly with screech like pulling your iPad backwards. So we checked what was the matter. Then I found a great huge bit of goo. I kept it to my self because I thought they would think it is my sticky slimy huge pot of goo. I went out of the car still looking for something else but I didn't find anything. Then I saw a huge bit of blood...

100 Word Challenge Extra By Muhammed Khan


...The Mercedes E-Class stopped suddenly...
After a small Turtle stopped in the middle of the Road. We couldn't stop because we
were going 40 miles per hour on a long straight road. The Cars Wheels screeched out
loud like nails on a black board. " Oh thank god hes still alive". The car stopped and the
Turtle was still there. When the car drove past the turtle Luckily We didn't kill him
because the cars chassi was quite high. We picked the Turtle up and then put him back
where he belongs. My Car was wrecked and one of my tyres were popped. "It will cost
me a fortune to buy a new set". The cars Airbags were taking over all the room in the
Car.

Just a few minutes later the Police came and asked us some questions. When the cars
tyres screeched it caused more damage and the noisiest sound ever Boom, Crash,
beep. " Make it stop,make it stop! the Cars tried to break but crash became the biggest
crash in the world records. 8 Tow Teucks had to come and we had to block the road. We
had to pay a fine. "Things didn't go as to well".

100 word challenge


The time car  stopped because a big dragon jumped In front of it.When they got out in 
space.it was a the biggest dragon on the wold.the wells started the slide and squeak.
 The dragon picked up the flying time car and he he tock us to the dragon ?NO! Said bill shouting to the dragon.When they reached dry land. the dragon nicked the computer NO said bill shouting to the half beastly dragon.dad said be quit now dragon or I will kill you and eat you for my dinner and tea it will last a year.

100 word challeng by Alexandra Giacopazzi

The car stopped suddenly... We looked around, but nothing was the. I then tried to get the key but then the car flipped and the back doors flew off in flames."Hello gaviner."
" Where have you been. Why has the car stopped?"
" RARA!"
" Takizam." He was our robot dog. He's livening a good life." Come on boy." The parade ended. I legged it, as soon as the chains brook we all did. Takizam ran like the wind. He was big so I got ride the grabbed on my friends shoulder and put him on.When I looked back, there was...



 

My 100 word challenge part 2 Luke Anderson


The dragon was as red as fire, as loud as a bunch of elephants and a face like a sea serpent. It roared and screamed and... It saved the computer. Tom screamed and cheered and he ran to get his computer, but when he ran to him he flew away. "WHAT ARE YOU DOING WITH MY COMPUTER?!" Tom tried to get it but it flew in the lava. Tom wanted to follow him but he was to fast. The dragon went in the lava. Then Tom went to his uncle because he had lots and lots of futuristic guns.

Rebecca Thompson 100 world challenge




The cars stop suddenly  a horrible  screech  because there was a flying black dreadful

 Hydrations in the world !dragon was in the way .So I shout "stop! " We were in the country next to a red apple tree .Then the dragon RORA loud it went throw the whole village everyone could hear it , so they stopped .So I ran out  from the car the dragon pick us up a tack us to his cave then .... the car  grow wings .The wings screech like a rat but his claws on a  bord   like a lion teeth .  So we traveled along in till the lost the road of a train so we lived on the train and I got my iPad and phone back .


My 100word challange part 1 by Luke Anderson


The car stopped suddenly when a earthquake irrupted the ground like a volcano. It stop as the wheels screeched like a cave of bats. The car was in the middle of Wallsend. It was a racing at us at the speed of sound. Dad reversed the car and went the opposite direction and we were safe. The rip in the ground was going state for the house and then... BOOM! The house had fallen into the lava. "MY COMPUTER!" Screamed Tom. Then... A giant dragon came out of the lava like a shark out of a ocean. The dragon shouted violently.

100 word challenge by Eugena Mwita

...The car stooped suddenly...I turned the wheel and landed on the edge of a cliff hanging. A big truck came swished its edge swiped me in the water. I was floating and screaming for help. I screamed " HELP, HELP!"  It all started when I was driving normal, then the wheels started screech like nails on a black board! Then...BOOOOM! The wheels blew up and fire started to burn, the fire getting higher and hot. So then the firemen came and got there hose...SSSSPLASHSHSH!! They pulled me out and saw that my body was full of blood dripping alover me...!

100 word challenge + by Lewis Bentham


...The car stopped suddenly...
The navy blue Sesto Elemento stopped after a giant bouncing gorilla bounced in front of the flying car. The passenger Kai screamed" ah it's a giant bouncy gorilla!"
The driver Benny said" it only a bouncing gorilla, it is popular around here."
Kai was only 5 and never really looked out the window. Benny was a driver of the car and he was Kai's older brother by 2 year because he was 7 years old. Benny thought it was as funny as a elephant shouting benny's name. The tyres pop off like a cheater going for a deer.

The passenger was fine but he wanted to get out. Benny was laughing and laughing and  he all most wet his pants. Benny got the parachute and attached it to him with something special that knowing but him knew what it was. Even his brother didn't know, he finally attached Kai and dropped out of the car. Finally he got his car back from in the middle of the sky. He attached the tyres and flew back yyin the sky happily. Kai got some training of Benny to not be scared of mid air and giant, bouncing gorillas.

100 + word challenge by Taylor


We were having a great time on the limo driving across the riverside when we saw a family of  foxes on the road.The driver slammed his brakes so that he wouldn't them over, they were asleep and not even a long BEEP would wake them. They were taking up to much time and we were in a hurry to get to the hotel! The limo driver hit the acceleration and ran them over! We drove away panicking and the car stopped suddenly for some reason.
Another set of foxes came out and burned the bus with a flame frower.

We eventually got out and then watched paradise but to the ground. What was dissapointing is that I left my phone on the limo! And oh what else was left...THE DRIVER!!!!! He is probably turned into a ash tray by now. So I guess we'll have to walk the whole way to the hotel witch is about 1000 miles away. We started a long journey to the relaxation centre without no water or food because it it ALL BURNED! I hate this day so much even more than anything! Could it possibly get any worse? Well I hope not.

100 word challenge by Lewis Bentham


...The car stopped suddenly...
The navy blue Sesto Elemento stopped after a giant bouncing gorilla bounced in front of the flying car. The passenger Kai screamed" ah it's a giant bouncy gorilla!"
The driver Benny said" it only a bouncing gorilla, it is popular around here."
Kai was only 5 and never really looked out the window. Benny was a driver of the car and he was Kai's older brother by 2 year because he was 7 years old. Benny thought it was as funny as a elephant shouting benny's name. The tyres pop off like a cheater going for a deer.

100 word challenge by Dylan Preston


The blue and red Ferrari stopped suddenly because a HUGE FOX ran across the road and the car flipped over the road and fell of a Clift and some people died. In the car were skulls every were.  The fox was an Alien and It came back to life. The alien killed everyone and every one ran of the Clift.the car ended up In a town called speed vill and everyone raced and raced down the road an U.F.O came down and blow up the village and everyone died and Alien destroyed the planet and every one stopped breathing and they died.

100 word challenge by Taylor Asiamah


We were having a great time on the limo driving across the riverside when we saw a family of  foxes on the road.The driver slammed his brakes so that he wouldn't them over, they were asleep and not even a long BEEP would wake them. They were taking up to much time and we were in a hurry to get to the hotel! The limo driver hit the acceleration and ran them over! We drove away panicking and the car stopped suddenly for some reason.
Another set of foxes came out and burned the bus with a flame frower.

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Thursday 14 February 2013

500 word challenge by Kaci Walker


                           One scary night the day before the tree
                   girls went to Australia a monster appeared at the bottom of the bed

On Monday 23 rd february 2013 the before Sophie Sarah and Kerry
 Went to Australia they were asleep in bed when a creek and a bang. Work
them up and seems when they work up there where nothing there so they all
 Went  down stairs .... And the telephone rang and Kerry carefully went over
to get the telephone there it started to get scary and everybody started to get scared. Then a  creek came from up stairs and they looked in Sarah's
bed  room and there were a monster and a ghost at the bottom of Sarah's
bed but only Sarah could see it.Then it turned morning and stared to pack
because we were going to Australia this afternoon so we had tea then we went to the air port. Soon after that the plain turned up and we got the plain and took of
and the next morning we arrived at Australian airport so we got of the plain
and went into our cottage in the village of the rich and I went down to the river.
To fetch some water and I saw something really wearied in the middle of the sea oh my it's a plant Sarah said its just a plant it's ok and no it's not ok the water is still.
It all started to get freaky and the sky started go green and the clouds started to go
purple also there were something green next to the strange plant in the water I was assuming it was a crocodile but it could have been anything.anyway I got the pot of water and left so that I didn't get in any trouble with safety god so I went back to the cottage and I my sisters something to drink. Then later on in the day I went back to the river to get more water for me and my sisters and there i saw a crocodile  in the middle of the sea next to the wearied plant. Then I grabbed some water in the bucket and left to go back to my sisters and Sophie was gone. Also she sleep walks so I wouldn't worry anyway I was worried last week when she did it I was worried then. And also I need to get some food for us and more water and that thing I saw last time I went to get some water you remember next to that unordinary plant I saw because I thought it was a crocodile and there might have been a boat next to it . Anyway I'm over that now like and plus what day was that because it my Sophie's birthday today and Kerry's tomorrow so I got to get some presents for them anyway its my birthday the next day after Kerry's birthday so I need to get my presents of my sisters today.
     





 

Tuesday 12 February 2013

100 word challenge by Kaci Walker


...The  weather changed for the worst...
                            It was nice day  suddenly me Alisha and Kerry heard booms and bands and we did not now what
   It was, But Alisha its just a bit of water then we heard an volcano came and we ran as fast as we could back to the house there were lots of them.Then me Kerry and Alisha
Were on there way home when court up and we got in the
house and we were safe at last.Then a volcano came across are roof and took it off we were frightened and we screamed and shouted.

100 word challenge by Alaisha Baird

The weather changed for the worst... It's not just a bad thing when it rains because the plants, bushes and trees need water because if they don't get water they will die. But it is in door and we can play on are iPads so it is fun playing on our iPads.  

100 word challenge by Kerry Shotton


...The weather changed for the worst...
                         
                        It was a nice day suddenly we heard booms and bang I felt a drop of water and Alisha said "it's only a bit of water u wimp" Kaci agreed with Alisha but I didn't. After that we saw a volcano and we ran fast as we could home,  threw we got home and didn't get court  but our door was locked so we couldn't get in. After that we had to find somewhere to go we had to sit in our tree house the storm was that bad it nearly blew down the tree house. Finally the storm stopped and it was sunny in the morning happy days then.  

100 word challenge by Rebecca Thompson





 The weather  changed  for the Worst...... I think it means some thing  bad happened or some thing  going to happen that bad. Like a curse what people put on you . It doesn't  mean the weather bad like it snow now it raining . you are  sad the weather Change for the best  .Everyone  get bad luck not lots of people have bad Luck or have good luck.Like Tom and Jerry they don't like each other . I have bad luck and every dose .Many people have bad luck .Everyone weather changed for everyone it not just you .
  

100 Word Challenge By Eugena Mwita


The weather changed for the worst... You wouldn't believe that this huge weather monster in the sky shook the intier world and made it full of rain, snow and wind together.
People's faces  had a shock and they all screamed and saw hundreds of wind zombies and snow zombies and rain zombies spraying the weather at the people.
People could die from this weather because its very strong. But the sun will come a shoot its fireball hotness on to you, until you have blood allover the ground.
These super heroes  come and battle till they are vanished for good and never seen again. Even no-one will come to there funeral.
These weren't any old super heroes they were... they were... were wearing nappies that had these shooting lasers that are red and bloody. You can see them every week souring and gliding with there nappies shooting to baddies. WATCH OUT THE LAZERS COULD HIT YOU!

100 word challenge by David Rigby


... The weather changed for the worst ...
and there was a huge tornado that terrified the valley it and broke their houses in half
No one had ever seen any of the people that lived in that valley for along time . You won't
Want to .The last person that went in that valley SNAP!!! they were gone just like that no one wants to see that . Even I would not want to go in the valley are to it but

KEEP THIS WARING DON'T EVER GO IN TO THE DEAD VALLEY - OR YOU WON'T COME OUT...


100 word challenge by David Rigby


... The weather changed for the worst ...
and there was a huge tornado that terrified the valley it and broke their houses in half
No one had ever seen any of the people that lived in that valley for along time . You won't
Want to .The last person that went in that valley SNAP!!! they were gone just like that no one wants to see that . Even I would not want to go in the valley are to it but

KEEP THIS WARING DON'T EVER GO IN TO THE DEAD VALLEY - OR YOU WON'T COME OUT...


100 word challenge by Lewis Farthing


The weather changed for the worst and how no body knows how except me.
It all started on a summers da when everyone was out side of corse I wasn't because I new it was going to happen because I had all of the gadgets to know that this was Going to happen.All of the people were out side and I herd a BANG! on my house and I looked outside and  it was a tun of huge parts of hailstone falling from the sky and tuns of people started running away as fast as a bullet they
left.

100 word challenge by Kia Surrey

 100 word challenge ... The wether change for the worst...
The wether changed for the worst is a bad thing if you think about it because there could be hurricanes thunders tornado's.

The risen for that is because they both can kill you and they can a lot of damage to a lot of things so it is dangerous for the animals not like pet animals but like the ones that  live in the house the ones that sleep in the forest and the jungle but don't jus think that you havet to go out and save the animals it just means sponsor a animal don't put your self in danger. 

100 word challenge by Alisha Maguire

......the weather changed for the worst...... It was a magical, sunny day and it was warm!  Every one was happy, until  the weather changed and the sky went pitch black They didn't know what to do, so they went inside. The front door was open and they tried to shut it until... SLAM the door closed. The kids were screaming, the parents were trying to calm them down but they couldn't. The parents realised a tornado and they watched it kill a man with a walking stick it was HORRIBLE but luckily the kids didn't see. A full street of houses were demolished and the people inside they were dead.