I went to a caravan and all you can see is beautiful grass. Also when I went outside heavy running rain drops. Every time I go outside all you can see is frost on the roof. Never go some where you can not see. Would ever do that? I wouldn't because, well you know why. I all way sry to not have to not go outside as possible but when I have to it's a problem. I would always never go outside for now reason. You could play a game. I know, what about
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Showing posts with label 100 Word Challenge. Show all posts
Showing posts with label 100 Word Challenge. Show all posts
Friday, 25 January 2013
100 word challenge by Alexandra Giacopazzi
It was 8:00 morning, while travelling through space Toothless sneaked out of bed with out waking up Satern. "Sparkles... Diamond, come on." Toothless whispered. "Lights!" Satern woke up. "Look at you." He said. " You your going to the sea planet we past two days ago. Without me."
" Look man I couldn't wake you." Toothless lied. Then barged in Sparkles and Diamond." Who woke him!" complained Sparkles. Satern was shocked. Then all of a sudden, Polo popped in." Grate! Now we have to take him."
" Look we can go to the green caravan." Toothless said.
" But it's frosty down there. Don't think about going to the ocean deck..."
" Look man I couldn't wake you." Toothless lied. Then barged in Sparkles and Diamond." Who woke him!" complained Sparkles. Satern was shocked. Then all of a sudden, Polo popped in." Grate! Now we have to take him."
" Look we can go to the green caravan." Toothless said.
" But it's frosty down there. Don't think about going to the ocean deck..."
100 word challenge by Kia Surrey
It was a frosty morning in the caravan. The heating Was on but it is still cold. I went outside and all I could see was the frost on the grass. Then my mam said your dad and you are going running
As soon as we started raining heavy. So we whent in too a cafe till it stopped. It stopped as soon as I go my hot chocolate then I saw a forest and bright green trees so we ran through and we where led to the caravan sight and mam was cutting the green grass so I helped here.
As soon as we started raining heavy. So we whent in too a cafe till it stopped. It stopped as soon as I go my hot chocolate then I saw a forest and bright green trees so we ran through and we where led to the caravan sight and mam was cutting the green grass so I helped here.
100 word challenge by Lewis Bentham
It was a cold day because Jack Frost was out in the green forest. There was a flying caravan coming down from space. It look was very heavy because it was made out of metal. When it landed the door opened I threw something of the caravan and then the green alien came out and was running after me was running after me threw nearly the hole forest but the forest wasn't that big. I thought I had lost him but when I turned around his was right in my face. I thought what is he going to do me.
100 Word Challenge by Muhammed Khan
In the Green forest I could see a Caravan stuck to ground, and trees just starting to tilt. In the window of the Caravan I saw green triangular heads just moving about. I heard weird noises like what you here from a old CD Player. Later it started to Rain really heavy so I went home. Outside the window I still saw the Caravan, but also I saw the Caravan door left open. When the rain cleared I ran back into the forest. The Aliens weren't in there so I went inside. After a few minutes the aliens came back...
100 word challenge by Taylor Asiamah
I could feel the Frost on the back of my neck, the rain was getting heavier as I walked down the forest. I could hear a weird laugh in the distance... and there it was again! I silently walked dodging the trees until I came to a crashed spacecraft in a ditch, and bursting out the door was a ugly, 3 eyed green alien. It chased me out the ditch, I started running through the woods. up to where I started I thought that I had got away, I got to my mams caravan and I locked the door quickly.
My 100 word challenge by Luke Anderson
The frost giant launched his self on to a skier when he was going to his house I Alaska when another one of them came. There was ones a man called Alex he was a noble adventurer and his house was in a grass green field with lots of animals. Me and my family went out to go to a caravan club and it was awesome because we went to Scotland. The heavy men went to a motorbike club and everybody screamed. I went to the Olympics to see the running and it was fascinating and I want to go.
100 word challenge. By Jessica Darmody
All of a sudden I was running around in the garden and the heavy rain soaked me! So I went to get a towel to dry my hair, but mum had moved the towels in to my grans caravan! The next morning it turned sunny, but in. A few hours time, it looked like someone had cast a spell on the whole town! It turned frosty! You couldn't see the beautiful glow on the flowers or the people having fun! The green grass had turned white because of the frost ! It was unbelievable! I thought I was seeing things!!!
Tuesday, 22 January 2013
Wolfs vs pigs by Luke Anderson
Three little pigs vs Alexander T. Wolf
Porker vill 12
January 18th 2013
Luke Anderson
Stephenson memorial primary school
Martin road
Wallsend
NE28 OAC
Dear Judge Jimmy,
Alexander T. Wolf wanted to bake a cake for is pore old granny. He had a terrible cold but the three little porkers got involved. The wolf wanted to borrow some sugar so he went down to porker village. He nocked on the stick houses door and the pig didn't say anything, that ignorant porker.After the first pigs house he went to the next and his house was made of sticks but he was busy shaving the hairs on his porky chin. Then he died and the there'd porker said get away. And that was all.
I have heard a rumour that the pig made all that story up the wolf couldn't, he had asthma. Why blame him?! He didn't do anything wrong he only wanted to borrow sugar for his dear old granny's birthday cake. Of course he's big and bad, what do you expect from a wolf is it illegal for a wolf to eat pigs it's a habit for wolf. Anyway it wasn't the wolf fault the thick porkers made their houses out of straw, he was being polite.
Now that you have heard the true story you should rallies the pour, innocent wolf. It is the pigs you should put in court they are making fun of him and is pour old granny will be crying that the wolf forgot her birthday. The wolf only wanted to bake a beautiful birthday cake for is pour old granny. The third little piggy said "now your granny can sit on a pin" and he gets cracky when someone talks about his granny, i mean so would I if some one talked about me gran like that. So you get what I mean, so let the innocent wolf out of custody right now!
Sincerely yours
Luke Anderson
Wednesday, 16 January 2013
100 word challenge by Alexandra Giacopazzi
... The notes from the piano echoed through the rayless old house. At first I thought it was Sid's mum but she was at a party. I got out from the soggy wet bedsheets and walked down the corridor in to the music room...a cold chill spirited down my spine as I walked in...my hair stood on end...a black cat sat on the piano...it was playing by it self... The cat ran at me. I slammed the door on the creature. A hand touched my shoulder. Thankfully it was Sid, so we went to bed and got some sleep.
100 word challenge by Dylan preston
I do think there are aliens on mars.
Come from space in a space ship.there is a film called ET what an alien came from space from mars.
Alien space ship might invade earth march 2013
What would you do if you
seen an Alien?
A.run
B.talk to it
C.panic
Tuesday, 15 January 2013
100 word challeng by Lewis Farthing
...The notes from the piano...
Just as I walked threw the door I heard a piano getting played and I thought to my self "I don't have a piano." When I went in there was nothing there besides a not and Dom said "emmmm what is it well it said help something has pushed me down stairs and know some one will be playing the piano.But you wont see him can't see him but suddenly the music stopped and the door slammed shut I was so petrified and I went to pick up the phone and something said to me " don't."
100 word challenge by Jamie brown ...the notes from the piano...
went with lighting. When the lightning stock the flow right in front of the house it scared but the piano always played music off horror movies so I would keep an I on the piano but the nots didn't move so I look to see mum or dad came home also it was home time for my brothers school and he likes playing the piano. Also it is scary that I had to go to the toilet every time the lighting stock. When I went up to the steps on the and I seen my brother playing the horror sounds.
100 word challenge by Kerry shotton
...The notes from the piano...
Ding dong ding dong the piano went all night as the gost blew I thought, to myself should I go in to my bedroom because I was watching a movie with popcorn and pop.After that it stopped so I crept up stairs but then when I got closer I heard this noise woooo woooo but when I stopped I saw a shadow but when I got to my bedroom. Suddenly the door shaked intact the whole house shaked and never stopped until a big boom noise it was my mum and dad the every thing just went back to normal as soon as my mam and dad came back. Magic!
100 word challenge by Kia Surrey
... The note from the piano...
Drifted into my ears and it made me dance to where it was it was really carm and gentel the music was also made me into a good mood after bing annoyed if you wher her it you would Dane along to the music. I could smell smoke of the person playing the piano but that dident stop me from dancing with the notes of the piano . I could see visionson me playing the pino like that then I looked at the time and then said " I am late for school" but I just kept going.
Drifted into my ears and it made me dance to where it was it was really carm and gentel the music was also made me into a good mood after bing annoyed if you wher her it you would Dane along to the music. I could smell smoke of the person playing the piano but that dident stop me from dancing with the notes of the piano . I could see visionson me playing the pino like that then I looked at the time and then said " I am late for school" but I just kept going.
100 word challenge by Alisha maguire
....The notes from the piano....
Were really loud it nearly burst my ear drum but each time it played a new cord it got louder and louder as the song went it got scarier and scarier each time. No matter where I went it got louder it was like it was chasing me. When I got to the piano there was no one there and it was still playing by its self I was trying to forget about it until I heard a loud bang I didn't know what it was so I didn't go back to the piano it was a ghost.
100 Word Challenge By Muhammed Khan
...The notes from the Piano were gently gliding across ever so gently. But when no one was playing the Piano, I heard the piano playing by itsself. The Piano was playing and it was playing a sound that was almost like Muh-amm-ed Muh-amm-ed, over and over again. I got freaked out and ran to my house, as soon as I opened the door I saw a gigantic Shadow but their was no one there. I was perturbed and ran upstairs. I called my Mum and Dad but they weren't there. I saw a lump in my bed - aaargh!!
100 word challenge by Taylor Asiamah
...The notes from the piano... The dings and the dongs, I never knew my friend could play such goodness. The tune of the piano was so intense and a bit freaky. I went up stairs to check the time but the power was off... I went back downstairs to see that my friend had gone from the piano and it was playing by its self! I tried to close the hud of the piano but it wouldn't budge, and then I let go, bad mistake it whacked me right in the mouth, I felt to the ground tasting blood. AHHH!
100 word challenge. By Luke Anderson
The notes of the piano were like a peaceful song. It was gentle and it smoothly went through my head like a melody my mum sang me. It was as gentle as the wind and as peaceful as the night sky. But what is that it is a bird tweeting like an angle it sounded so pretty but that was the piano it was so beautiful it blown me away. When I went down stairs I everybody started dancing to the magnificent tune and I started to it was that good everybody fainted when we all stopped dancing.
100 word challenge. By Naomi Dawson
...the notes from the Piano...
Ping pong ping pong ping, I walked into the living room hearing funny noises I walked in and I started to Wallis. It was staring I was just dancing weirdly like never dancing before. Suddenly the music was getting louder I heard it wising in my head I felt strange like I was going bake to when I was a baby. The memory's. I heard the sound of it rustling in ear, ear I smelt the chocolate marshmallows as I Waltzed along the floor.
I saw my mam taking the chocolate marshmallow into my mouth.
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