Tuesday 12 March 2013

100 word challenge by Jamie Brown called terrible teleporter

The casual cat and the annoying orange where freezing on the moon so they and the cat said this while he was freezing, " I have a mysterious teleportation bath on the over side of this planet." So they went to the over side of the planet and found the mysterious teleportation bath and went on it. They ended up in the far away galaxy. They jump back in the teleportation bath and got to place that they loved but got separated and had to run back to each other. Suddenly they got transported to mars but at the huge volcano.

1 comment:

  1. Dear Jamie Brown, your story was full of excited feelings I think ! It was very fun too read it . Here are a few questions for you .
    1.How long did it take to write the 100 word challenge ? 2. What was your favorite part of your story ? 3. Is this your 1st time that you wrote an 100 word challenge
    Your friend,
    Ayejah

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