The car is powerfull and it is red and it is fast and fast !!!!!!!!! And the window is black as the night sky. People could here noises coming from the graves popped up the ZOMBIES and it said brains and brains and brains !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I was a bit confused here. What was the link between the car and the zombies? I thought that the beginning of the writing was really good and really liked the phrase 'the window is black as the night sky'. Maybe you could continue this start to make it up to 100 words about the car?
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ReplyDeleteI was a bit confused here. What was the link between the car and the zombies? I thought that the beginning of the writing was really good and really liked the phrase 'the window is black as the night sky'. Maybe you could continue this start to make it up to 100 words about the car?
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