Wednesday 27 February 2013

100 word challenge by David Rigby


...The car stopped suddenly...

“Bang!!!” We got out of the car and the driver was dead and there  there was a glow underneath...We all looked under the car in shock .The wheels were still screening like mad from the crash, suddenly something jumped out of the back of the car it was so fast non of us could see it very much Lewis said "Hey Joe what do you think it is?" ”I don't know"Kia said suddenly lots of the more little critters jumping all around the place suddenly.
A asteroid came and they followed it ."CRASH! BANG"...

 

1 comment:

  1. That is a good 100 word challenge .aaron5t

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