... The car stopped suddenly..
We were drying through the village and suddenly some thing mysterious happened. A dragon came out of know where and it picked up our car and started flying with us and dropped us and smoke every where we ended up in some town some how. We tried to get out of the car but we couldn't because the doors were locked tight and the car was starting to go on fire and flame up.
Some people in cars were diving past none of them saw us but one person did they helped us out of the car and unlocked it for us we eventually got out.
Wow that's great!
ReplyDeleteGreat work I liked the bit where you said some thing mysterious.
ReplyDeleteKerryS
Thank you but who wrote this can you please put you're name by Alisha Maguire
ReplyDeleteWell done for taking part in this week's 100WC this week Alisha. This sounds like a very scary occurance for the occupants of the car. I am glad someone stopped to help them.
ReplyDeleteAlways take care to check your writing before you publish you work, you have used drying instead of driving in your opening sentence.
Keep up the great writing.
Miss Wallis - Team 100WC