Wednesday 27 March 2013

100 word challenge Naomi Dawson


 Minney  was waking down the street and She  saw a huge chocolate river.Her  eyes nearly popped out it was amazing.
 "yes, She has deemed of this before!' Then she saw a little chocolate egg rolling down the hill in to the chocolate river.
       She turned around and saw the black hole. She screamed
It was sucking her in side she  had know where to hold onto so she screamed and she got  sucked inside.

A few minutes later she  was in a chocolate  land " Look at all that chocolate!" Minney  said amazed.
She ran and jumped into to the chocolate sea.

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