Wednesday 27 February 2013

100 word challenge by mason


The time car  stopped because a big dragon jumped In front of it.When they got out in 
space.it was a the biggest dragon on the wold.the wells started the slide and squeak.
 The dragon picked up the flying time car and he he tock us to the dragon ?NO! Said bill shouting to the dragon.When they reached dry land. the dragon nicked the computer NO said bill shouting to the half beastly dragon.dad said be quit now dragon or I will kill you and eat you for my dinner and tea it will last a year.
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2 comments:

  1. Anonymous27 February 2013 at 14:26

    Good story and great punctuation.
    By Dylan Preston

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  2. Brandon18 March 2013 at 21:16

    Dear Mason,

    That was a good story and I like the ending were the dad said that he was going to eat the dragon.What does nicked mean?This was a funny story.

    Your friend,
    Brandon

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