Monday 4 February 2013
100 word challenge by Jamie B
...out of the blue...Miss Foster said we are going to learn about Space wee. I was thinking that we would get told off for talking about wee. Everyone thought it was insane. I don't think anybody was looking forward to it. Actually now one was looking forward to it. When we are going to start the lesson I hope the day goes fast. Who would be looking forward to learn about your wee. Now one would except some one who can resist anything. I just hope it isn't so slow the day because well just say not so disgusting. Don't be really sick.
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Hi Jamie, thank you for writing for the 100WC, it was a very imaginative story! Try to add some connective words to your story to make your sentences longer and flow better. Also read over your work to check your spelling. You mixed 'now' with 'no'. Keep writing!
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