Tuesday 22 January 2013

Wolf looking for freedom by Alexandra Giacopazzi

The three little pigs verses
Alexander t wolf





January 18th 2013

Alexandra Giacopazzi
Stephenson Memorial Primary School
Martin Road
Wallsend
NE280AG


Dear Judge Jimmy,
On the 17th January in the little group of cottages in the woods, Alexander T Wolf was making a cake for his granny. But he ran out of sugar. That was when Alexander went to the pigs house which was made of straw. He knocked on the door which the fell strait in. Alexander asked if the pig was in. Then he snized and the whole house fell down. In the middle was a dead pig. He was framed for the murder of the little pig.
How unfair! How could he blow down those houses with a cold? But even a sneeze could not blow them down. Now the pig house come on. No-one but a compleat idiot would build his house out of straw! Even though the door fell down, he didn't barged in. He asked if the pig was in. If you were the wolf what would you do?
Now that you know the true story I hope your court will take this innocent  wolf and take him out of custody and let him live a happy life.

From
Alexandra Giacopazzi

3 comments:

  1. Wow them stories are really nice! How long did it take you to write them?Great stories!!

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  2. Dear Alexandra,

    We enjoyed your letter to the judge. We feel you have a very convincing letter, and that the wolf should be set free! How did the pig die? Was it because the straw house fell on him? It seems unusual for straw to cause that much harm. Was the whole house made out of straw? Was the door at least wood? We have a type of straw house in the desert called adobes. These houses use mud as well as straw.

    Your new quadblogging friends,
    Raymond and Ayejah

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  3. Hi, If I was the wolf I would knock down the house and look everywhere for the pig, I wouldn't just ask where he is!! But your story is really good.

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