Friday 25 January 2013

100 word challenge by Kieran Cook

In a frosty green field living in a bleak ancient caravan was a man called Scott.He was on a pursuit trying to escape from the gods of Rangoon. The rain started to pour heavy and he started to sprint because they had found him again.He kept on running and ran for his life all of a sudden E.T appeared at the bottom of the field.
I feared that he was gonna eat me I ran But he followed exactly the same path the only thing that what I could do was kick him in the face................

1 comment:

  1. Hi Kieran

    Interesting use of the challenge words. I was a little confused when you shifted from the third person story (about a man called Scott) to a first person story (when ET appeared.

    Keep writing

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