Tuesday 22 January 2013

Help the wolf by Jamie


The three little pigs verses              
Alexander T. Wolf



January 18th 2013

Jamie Brown
Stephenson Memorial Primary school
Martin Road
Wallsend
NE28 OAG

Dear Judge July,
The pigs say they were innocent but know the wolf was innocent because he didn't puff he sneezed. Also the wolf was only asking for a cup of sugar. The two little pigs were stupid, they built their house out of straw and sticks in Porker Village, so when the wolf sneezed, it blow the houses down and they where dead so he ate them. I have evidence that the wolf didn't huff and puff the houses down because he had asthma. Also this was a long time ago so now one knows the real story.

Is it fair that the wolf didn't get to say his side of the story? Do you know that big bad wolf thing is all wrong he didn't blow the houses down he sneezed also not even a healthy wolf could because the air can't go all the way out. The poor wolf only wanted sugar but the pigs were mean and didn't give him even a little drop but thing is that it was for his dear old granny's birthday cake. Remember that the pigs built there house out of straw and sticks so they were stupid. So when the wolf knocked on the door it fell down and the last pig said something after he asked for some sugar. Or  will I tell you the last pig. The last pig said "your granny can sit on a door nail," so wolf made a scene. Should the wolf suffer for something he did not do?

I know that you think about that POOR wolf and how he must feel? Take the wolf out of court and there will be a happy ending for everyone and of course you.

Sincerely yours,
Jamie Brown












2 comments:

  1. Wow that is a really nice story.Did you enjoy writting it? I think your right about the wolf because he only had a cold.

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  2. Dear Jaime Brown,
    I think that the wolf should be let out of jail because he did not do anything to the pigs he just sneezed and the house fell over its not his falteand i hope he dose not get locked up in jail and dose not get hurt

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