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Wednesday, 27 February 2013
100 word challenge by Naomi Dawson
The car stopped with a BANG!! Because a huge allian sorcer was following behind them. The weels were screeching as the car stoped and every stayed still.
"What was that mum?" Said the girl
"I do not know" replied mum.
They all got out of the car and saw a grate big flying sorcer.
It was a huge as an elephant.
Mum did a head count, "Lucy, Carl, Lewis and dad few were were missing no one."
The girl looked around her "mum were are we?"
"It lookes like were I grew up."
Then something cam out of the sorcer...
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That's so amazing but just add adverbs, it's still amazing! By Eugena Mwita
ReplyDeleteWow! That's just amazing! By Jessica Darmody
ReplyDeleteThis looks exciting. I wonder what came out of the sorcer. By AlexandraG
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