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Tuesday, 12 February 2013
100 word challenge by Naomi Dawson
The weather changed for the worst, because the weather was running through my house and a plug wire was lying on the floor and the Walter touched it and in 321 me and my mum were lying on the floor.
Dad and my brothers where out dad came rushing in and saved mine and my mam's lives...
I woke up and jumped. My brothers and my dad was sitting beside me and my mum. All of our faces were as black as the night sky, we were lucky we were still alive.
We nearly died and mum's heart stopped beating and my brothers and father
ran to my mothers bed beeeeeeeeeep she was dead.
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