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Wednesday, 27 February 2013
100 word challenge + by Lewis Bentham
...The car stopped suddenly...
The navy blue Sesto Elemento stopped after a giant bouncing gorilla bounced in front of the flying car. The passenger Kai screamed" ah it's a giant bouncy gorilla!"
The driver Benny said" it only a bouncing gorilla, it is popular around here."
Kai was only 5 and never really looked out the window. Benny was a driver of the car and he was Kai's older brother by 2 year because he was 7 years old. Benny thought it was as funny as a elephant shouting benny's name. The tyres pop off like a cheater going for a deer.
The passenger was fine but he wanted to get out. Benny was laughing and laughing and he all most wet his pants. Benny got the parachute and attached it to him with something special that knowing but him knew what it was. Even his brother didn't know, he finally attached Kai and dropped out of the car. Finally he got his car back from in the middle of the sky. He attached the tyres and flew back yyin the sky happily. Kai got some training of Benny to not be scared of mid air and giant, bouncing gorillas.
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I like it how you have used class mates in your 100 word challenge by Taylor
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