Monday 17 December 2012

100 Word Challenge by Taylor Asiamah

This magical comb belongs to Gary the Gorilla. He loves to comb his hair infront of his mirror, Gary just simply loves himself. This comb is a bark brown colour with Lemmon yellow stars in a straight line going up the middle. Toothbrushes are a waste of time for Gary, so he brushes his teeth with his wonderful comb! It is a toothbrush a styling comb, and its his tedy bear to got to sleep with at night all in one! They will have a bright future together as best friends for life. Good friends? Or will they be frenemies?!
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  1. Unknown17 December 2012 at 16:29

    A toothbrush styling comb?!
    *Brilliant and humorous blog entry, well done.
    *Effective use of rhetorical questions.
    - Check through your work when finished (I'm not sure your fifth sentence makes sense).

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  2. Lori 17 December 2012 at 22:17

    I like how magical the comb sounds. It is really good.

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  3. Anonymous18 December 2012 at 09:26

    what funny and magical sentences well done!

    Muhammed Khan

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  4. Anonymous18 December 2012 at 09:38

    He just simply loves himself funny !!!!


    Muhammed Khan

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  5. Anonymous19 December 2012 at 22:43

    Hi Taylor great 100wc, loved your descriptions of Gary the Gorilla and his comb. Liked the way you ended with the rhetorical question, keep up the good work. :)

    Lauren - 100wc

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