Monday 17 December 2012
100 word challenge by Eugena and Rebecca
The zoo keeper was walking past the navy blue sea, and SPLASH! He fell into the water and found a underwater car with wings. The car was rusty with blue lumps on the front with enormous large wings going up and down really fast . Then he saw some gigantic shrimps on the steering wheel driving, and the passenger pressing buttons that make the wings go up and down. He found it weird and mysterious, also found quite strange, he blinked his eyes but they were still there! They drove away and threw water on the zoo keeper. ZOOOOM! THE CAR WENT
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Wow! Gigantic shrimps driving the underwater car?!
ReplyDelete*Great blog entry, what brilliant imagination!
*Good use of exclamation marks for effect.
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I think it's great !!!!!!!! From Jessica Darmody
DeleteI think it is really good and my favourite part is how you wrote he blinked but it was still there! Just like a real book would!
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DeleteWell mrs foster when I go home I might do another one so you can see it
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