Tuesday 18 December 2012

100 Word Challenge by Kerry Shotton

The unusual, mysterious bowling ball flickered of gold. It had
belonged to a fat, hairy beastly monkey for 12 years, who laughed all
day long and all night. The monkey loved his lucky ball so much if
anyone tries to steal it he would attack them and he would bite them
to death. For how long he had that special ball it was his favourite
thing in the whole wild world, it was very precious to him. Also it
can smash through anything glass, cardboard and brick any thing you
can think of. The amazing ball is built only for fat, hairy beastly
monkeys.


5 comments:

  1. Good work! Don't keep on adding fat fat use more words from the thesaurus app like chubby, big

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  2. Your first sentence made me amazed and made read on.


    From Jamie

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  3. Thanks I will . From kerry

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  4. Great work Kerry your 100 words wowed me.

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  5. Thanks every body great comments from Kerry

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