Monday 17 December 2012

100 Word Challenge by Muhammed Khan

I was once waking down the street and I saw a comb lying on the ground. The comb was shiny ever so brightly like the sun as if it was trying to take pictures. The comb was very spiky like a Hedgehogs Spine. I had picked up the comb and was heavy as a weight. It was on the beach near the stunning Ocean. I had dropped the comb and it lost a edge. I had a Neighbour and he saw me holding his comb right on front. His name is Big Bad Bill. He yelled in my face LEAVE!

1 comment:

  1. How did the comb get into the Night Zoo Keeper's bag, Muhammed? *Mysterious blog entry!
    *Great use of adjectives.
    - Try to vary sentence openers.

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