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Tuesday, 15 January 2013
100 word challenge by Kerry shotton
...The notes from the piano...
Ding dong ding dong the piano went all night as the gost blew I thought, to myself should I go in to my bedroom because I was watching a movie with popcorn and pop.After that it stopped so I crept up stairs but then when I got closer I heard this noise woooo woooo but when I stopped I saw a shadow but when I got to my bedroom. Suddenly the door shaked intact the whole house shaked and never stopped until a big boom noise it was my mum and dad the every thing just went back to normal as soon as my mam and dad came back. Magic!
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This is brilliant !i think it good .
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Check your spellings and use more adjectives.#EugenaMwita
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