…the car stopped suddenly…
It stopped fast and it hurt really bad and was like I had broken some thing. Because there was unicorn that jumped in front of the car. There out side of the car was a unique unicorn with a gigantic horn. I struggled to get out of the car but I managed so I opened the door and looked down and so how high I was " I ....think....I'll stay in the car" I said to everyone. The unicorn was pulling us up somehow then I had land safely and I was on a cloud how.......
In the distance I saw a one headed Beast. The unicorn shouted " RUN FOR IT" everyone ran and I saw him fall over and died. I saw the unicorn trip so I didn't want to leave without her she was spacial to me the best pet ever well kind of my pet so I went around an helped it then I saved her and she well we went home my mam and dad sadly died so she took her to a other house and I kept her as a pet and they had a happy life together and lived happily ever after.
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Wednesday, 27 February 2013
100 Word Challenge By Muhammed Khan
...The Mercedes E-Class stopped suddenly...
After a small Turtle stopped in the middle of the Road. We couldn't stop because we
were going 40 miles per hour on a long straight road. The Cars Wheels screeched out
loud like nails on a black board. " Oh thank god hes still alive". The car stopped and the
Turtle was still there. When the car drove past the turtle Luckily We didn't kill him
because the cars chassi was quite high. We picked the Turtle up and then put him back
where he belongs. My Car was wrecked and one of my tyres were popped. "It will cost
me a fortune to buy a new set". The cars Airbags were taking over all the room in the
Car.
100 word challenge by David Rigby
...The car stopped suddenly...
“Bang!!!” We got out of the car and the driver was dead and there there was a glow underneath...We all looked under the car in shock .The wheels were still screening like mad from the crash, suddenly something jumped out of the back of the car it was so fast non of us could see it very much Lewis said "Hey Joe what do you think it is?" ”I don't know"Kia said suddenly lots of the more little critters jumping all around the place suddenly.
A asteroid came and they followed it ."CRASH! BANG"...
100 word challenge by Lewis Farthing
The blue Lamborghini stopped suddenly, because a fish van stopped in the way and by mistake we ran over a cat and the tiers just automatically stopped somehow,the weels skreeched like fingers on a blackbord flipped and tried to toss them selvs out of there seats ( aaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!!)and befor they did they found that they were flying. Whilst we were flying an earthquake struk and killed tuns of people ( building fall in and every one fell threw a hole exept me and Kia). We circled the world and we could not find any thing in the world I mean it.
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