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Wednesday, 27 March 2013
100 word challenge Naomi Dawson
Minney was waking down the street and She saw a huge chocolate river.Her eyes nearly popped out it was amazing.
"yes, She has deemed of this before!' Then she saw a little chocolate egg rolling down the hill in to the chocolate river.
She turned around and saw the black hole. She screamed
It was sucking her in side she had know where to hold onto so she screamed and she got sucked inside.
A few minutes later she was in a chocolate land " Look at all that chocolate!" Minney said amazed.
She ran and jumped into to the chocolate sea.
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