Tuesday, 12 March 2013

100 word challenge by Naomi Dawson


Timmy was  a cat that has brown fur and blue eyes, he has a friend called Rocky Rocket. Timmy went over to Rocky Rocket and said "Would you like to come on a trip with me?"  
"Yes sure." " But  were are we going? Replied Rocky
Rocket. "To space!"
Rocky and Timmy visited mars and then they saw earth.
Rocky saw the hot bubbly black bath and started flout to towards the hot bubbly black bath.
Timmy started to flout faster and and then he pulled Rocky Rocket's arm and said do not go near it, it  is dangerous  bubbly bath...
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  1. Andrew Williams18 March 2013 at 20:56

    Well done Naomi, thank you for your 100 words.
    I can see that you've used bath, but what about the other words?!
    I think your speech marks are brilliant, well done for using good punctuation.

    Andrew
    Team 100wc

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